I really want to improve my style in english, any help will be appreciate ! I'm not english native so there's probably a lot of mistakes, sorry about that. I'd love to have advice and feedback on the little story I put, it's the first time I write something like this. I use armor pieces that looks like some gladiators or "bad" fighters, that I mix with the t3 helmet to keep the wing and noble touch ! Colors are simple, but fit the wings (I think).
I change the colors to match the wings from PvP because I really like them, and then I realised it was very close from the colors used by the Shining Blade, which gave me the idea to write the little story you can read above. I keep the visible torso, because I love armor like this. Hi everyone ! Here's the new look of my guard. Some people say it’s shocking but he doesn’t really care about that, and make use of his charms to seduce men. Now he is known as the exhibitionist of the court because he is always wearing an armor with is visible torso. It was at this moment that Anise asked him to be part of Queen Jennah’s guards.
She came to talk to him and noticed that the cold look he had was only an appearance.įew months after the diner Arthur distinguished himself by saving two important members of the Pact. Nobody noticed him, as he was not really talkative with strangers. He was sneaking around in an uncomfortable suit, looking at all the guests with attention. He became an important member of Queen Jennah’s protection sphere for 5 years now, when Countess Anise noticed him at a diner with the aristocracy of the Divinity’s Reach. “You’re right, I’m going to be late again… Well, I’m leaving ! And stop calling me Sir !” Arthur says, while running out of the manor. “I don’t know Sir, but you should go now, or the Countess Anise will wait for you.”
“Oh thank you Marie, what would I do if you weren’t here ?” “Sir Arthur you forgot your helmet !” Calls a motherly voice.
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